Write a imaginative paragraph describing how you would defend yourself and save others if you had super powers. Your paragraph should begin with a description of how your superhero body would help you survive an attack. Tell at least three ways that it helps you avoid or defeat an attacker (maybe these are superpowers). Use descriptive words that will help the reader make a mind movie. Your paragraph will be posted on our class blog with your classmates descriptive paragraphs.
Scoring Guide
A description of yourself 20 points
as a superhero
At least three ways that this change
would help you defend yourself 20 points each
60 points
Use descriptive language that help 20 points
the reader make a mind movie
Superwoman
ReplyDeleteBy Kady
I wear a red, white and blue stars outfit with a short skirt and t-shirt. My costume is indestructible. I have long pink hair. My powers are shape shift, speed and, strength. I can use my shape shift to shape into any thing you want me to. I can shape shift into a cheetah and scare the evil predator away. I can throw your predator all the way to Mars. I can control time time by running very fast around earth to bring back time. My speed is faster than a tiger or a cheetah. My strong arms can pick up 150 people in one day. Here comes the one, the only Superwoman.
Whiplash the Villain
ReplyDeleteI am Whiplash. I am covered in armor, not even the toughest super hero can penetrate it. I am as tall as a rhino and as strong as a raging bull. My eyes are as red as the summer sun. I also have spikes made of gold on my arms and the angrier I get, the bigger and sharper my spikes become.
One of my main powers is shape shifting. My arms and body can change to any machine, like chains, guns, and best of all: the mother of all swords the BFS. This protects me from my enemies because when my enemies try to sneak up on me, my arms can change and it will give me the ability to defeat my enemy.There is a reason why there are wholes in my hands and chest they shoot out hyper beams.This helps me a lot. If my enemy attacks I will blast him to death. My last ability is that I can fly. If I am in battle I will fly so fast my opponent will not see me and that helps me get away. That is my villain named Whiplash.
By “John the Whiplash”
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DeleteStewey Griffin The Super Hero Cop by Josh
ReplyDeleteGriffin, Stewy Griffin, is a cop that can wear any kind of law-enforcement uniform in the world. Stewey also is as light as a feather and as strong as the strongest person in the world. Stewey can change to anything he wants to. Stewey can also get any kind of gun in the world, even if he makes it up also he can never die. Say hello to my little friend whoa!ha! ha! ha! ha!
American Man
ReplyDeleteAmerican Man is as strong as Godzilla. He has the America Flag on the front of his suite and he is as tall as the Empire state building. He is super resilient. American man can throw a tank acrossed the ocean. He can also throw a truck all the way to the moon. He can also fly. American man can fly all around the world in five seconds. He can fly so fast that when he flies past someone they cannot see him. He can see any invisable thing. American man has laser eyes. If American Man was a villain he could melt a car in three seconds and he could put a person on fire in one second. He is American man and this is how he defends himself.
By Ethan
MAGIC MAN !!!!
ReplyDeleteMy costume is blue, red and black. I wear a long black cape. My muscles are popping out of my costume and my vanes are as if they are going to pop out of my arms. I am 6”9 and my hair is black. My powers are resilient. I am fast. I am magical and also I am a mind reader. I can pick up any thing to throw at my my enemy. I am fast so if I get cough I can make a quick getaway. I am faster then my enemy and stronger then my enemy so I can out run them. I can turn in to different things like animals. Also I can change my surroundings to fool my enemy’s. Also I can mind read. I know when they are going to attack me and I know when how they are going to attack me so I will be ready when they do attack.
My strong power helps me because I can out power my enemy to destroy them and and it helps me save people to. My power magical helps me because I can turn into anything to get away or change my surroundings to confuse my enemy and trick them and then I can turn into a animal or something to defeat my enemy. My last power a mind reader that helps me to defeat my enemy because I can mind read and know when they are going to attack and when they do I can reverse the attack and defeat my enemy.
THE END
BY KYLE.D
Torchgirl
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Torchgirl I am a hero. I am really fast and invisible. I have a bright pink cape that warns other Torchgirls that our predator are here. My pants are light and bright blue. My eyes are as blue as blue as the sky. I have four super powers, they are speed, flight, strength, and flexibility. My four super powers are sweet. I can lift up as many things as I want.
One of my super powers is speed. I am as fast as the wind and can zip throw anything in just a second. Also I can go up to 200 miles an hour. This power helps me defend myself because when I get caught my speed helps me out run them in just a second. Another one of my super powers is flight. When I fly fire comes off my shoulders and my bottom of my feet. Also when I fly I am all relaxed flat in the air. This power will help me defend myself because when somebody is about to catch me all I need to do is take off. I am also have lots of strength can lift up as many things as I want to at the same time. This super power helps me defend is that if they come over to me and start punching me it will NOT HURT. Also if they are coming at me I can just throw something heavy at them like a big car. My last super power is flexibility i can defend myself with flexibility by rolling up into a ball and roll away from my predators. I can stretch as much as I want. It looks like I am going to snap in half. I can fit through anything and I am 2d so I can go throw tiny tiny cracks.
I am Torchgirl and these are my abilities and these are the way’s I use them to defend myself from my predators.
thank u for dis i have copied into ma own words and used for school homework thank u
DeleteFamily Man
ReplyDeleteFamily man is a hero. His colors are pink, purple and yellow. He has pink on his shirt, purple on his mask and yellow for his pants. He is 7 feet 8 inches tall. He is as strong as King Kong. He is a hero and will save all of you. Also Family man is really buff. He can’t feel anything when you drop it on him. He can jump of a building and bounce back up if he lands on his chest and stomach, but if he doesn’t he just climbs right back up. Also he can imitate other people’s looks. He can look like a fat man, skinny woman, a baby, dog, fat boy and ugly girl. Also he can look like a hot man and a handicap guy. Also, thirdly he is really strong. He can lift up the biggest building in the world like the empire state building. He can knock out 1,000 Sumo wrestlers at once. That is why he is a hero.
By Mahlik
kady I think you could add more$
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ReplyDeleteBy Stephanie
Wonder Women is 6 feet 5 inches tall. Her suit is blue with pink and purple polka dots. She has blond curly hair as beautiful as a sunset. Some of her powers are run fast,flight, and she is strong. Here are some details how she runs fast. She can run all over the world in 1 minute. She can get to Africa in 50 seconds. She helps people everywhere. Another power is she can fly. Here are some details about how she can fly. She can fly up on top of every building. She flies when ever she wants to help people. Another power is that she is strong. Some details about how she is strong are she can lift 2 cars at one time. She is so strong she can lift 4 Sumo wrestlers. Don’t you think she is an awesome hero?????????????
The Hero
ReplyDeleteThe Hero is invisible (can’t die no matter what in less he was burnt to ashes) and can shape shift into any thing (he cant turn into any thing in the world even a TV and even a bug) and has the ability to fly and able to run faster than a jet going one billion miles per minute. The ability to fly would give me a big advantage if the enemy could not fly. Another way that flying would give me an advantage is because if one of my enemies dropped a person from 500-1000 feet in the sky, I could fly there and save the person. The ability to run with supersonic speed would give me an advantage because if I have to chase someone down I would be able to catch them within a minute. Another reason why my ability to run at super sonic speed would give me an advantage because if i had to get away from something I could do that sooner than i needed to. The ability to shape shift would give me a big advantage because if i needed to be sneaky to get some here in a building where my enemy is i could turn into a pencil then when the guard as gone I could slip threw the door. Another reason why my ability to shape shift would give me an advantage because if i needed another super heros powers i could just shape shift into the other hero and have y ability’s and there ability’s. This is what i look like i have the same suit as super man but its metal and where the blue would be there would be black and where the red would be it would be real gold and there are foot long gold spikes on each shoulder and six inch gold spikes all over my arm’s and legs and chest and there are foot long spikes all down my spine and I have gold colored gloves do you think i look cool I look cool.
By Aaron
NATU Goblin Warrior
ReplyDeleteMy villain’s name is Natu and he weighs 400 pounds (all muscle). His height is 6 feet 2 inches. He also has a sword of magic that will trap his enemy in a force field and will weaken the good guy for a super punch. Natu also has armor of titanium. It is bullet proof and it can withstand anything that the enemy throws at him. For the last thing it is muscle. He packs a punch called the super punch and he can lift heavy things. This helps him because he is able to lift up a heavy enemy. This is my villain.
By Shawn
Strong Man
ReplyDeleteStrong man is a super hero. He is six feet two inches tall. His armer is shiny and silver. It can not be broken even by a bazooka bullet. He is super strong, he can turn into fire and he can fly. One of his powers is he has super strength. He can lift a bolder. This helps him defend himself because he can crush enemies. Also he can catch a falling car. This helps him defend himself because he wont get crushed. Anther power he has is he can turn into fire. He can burn anything. This helps him defend himself because if his enemy throws something at him he burns throw it. Also he can make a fire when needed. This helps him defend himself because he can catch his enemy on fire. The third power he has is he can fly. Also he can fly up to 500 feet. This helps him defend himself because he can fly to the point were his enemies cant reach him. Also he can fly away when he is weekend. This helps him defend him self because he wont get crushed. That is why is strong man is a super hero.
By Dylan
Strong Man
ReplyDeleteStrong man is a super hero. He is six feet two inches tall. His armer is shiny and silver. It can not be broken even by a bazooka bullet. He is super strong, he can turn into fire and he can fly. One of his powers is he has super strength. He can lift a bolder. This helps him defend himself because he can crush enemies. Also he can catch a falling car. This helps him defend himself because he wont get crushed. Anther power he has is he can turn into fire. He can burn anything. This helps him defend himself because if his enemy throws something at him he burns throw it. Also he can make a fire when needed. This helps him defend himself because he can catch his enemy on fire. The third power he has is he can fly. Also he can fly up to 500 feet. This helps him defend himself because he can fly to the point were his enemies cant reach him. Also he can fly away when he is weekend. This helps him defend him self because he wont get crushed. That is why is strong man is a super hero.
By Dylan
finished aiw. Ryan
ReplyDeleteIncredible Man
ReplyDeleteMy name is Incredible Man and I can save your life any day, any time. I am 6 feet 7 inches tall. I am incredibly strong. I am very, very fast and I am INDESTRUCTIBLE. If you are stuck in a tree and surrounded by villeins I can fly by and grab you and you will be safe. If you are being held hostage I can take down all of the guys by myself. I can catch a burglar in a car by foot, I am so fast. My super powers are flight, incredible strength, and speed. If I have to travel long distances I will be able to do this with my flight powers. If a civilian is in trouble I can get to my destination in a blink of an eye. My other power is incredible seed. If I need to I can lift the twin towers at once. I can stop a treacherous hum-v in it tracks. My third power is speed. “My” speed can get a person out of danger. Lastly “my” speed can get me to a place before my enemy does. And that is my SUPER HERO! ryan
Ghost rider
ReplyDeletehe wares a black laether jacket he is 6 feet tall and he rides a motorcycle. He has super strangth with super strangth he can throw cars and crush anything. He can turn invesibel with invesiblety he can snaek up on bad guys he also can hide from bad guys. When he is on his motorcycle he can fly he can cath bad guys who can fly he can cath air plans by flying on them.Ghost rider can save the world
The Chain
ReplyDeleteI will destroy you! I am The Chain and I am an evil villain. My face is masked and my clothes are as dark as the night sky. I am as stiff as a tree. My powers are super strength,super speed, and my favorite the power to change to different powers! Ha!Ha!Ha!.
Ok! I will tell you how I protect my self with my strength by forcing my enemy away with my muscles.
My speed I can use to make sure my enemy can’t catch
me. I can change my powers to super jump or flight and
fly way or jump away.
By:Robert
I think you did awsome
ReplyDeleteto kady
i am responding to robert. Robert you did a good job but you could have more supporting details in your paragraph other than that you did a good job.
ReplyDeleteFrom:Aaron
To:Robert
u did a good job on telling aout this person. tell what natu.
ReplyDeletekady
i am a torch boy i have a black cape and hot pink pants
ReplyDeletehello i am called fast and furious i am a good hero these are some words to describe me. rippled muscles, benevolent, thoughtful, powerful, forceful, rapid, curageous, persevere, exhilarated, adventurous, chinup, brave, determind,strong,jubilent, mighty, convival, hypersonic, confident, philanthropic, salvage i amm 11 years ols
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