Pretend that you are an inventor. You have just invented a new product. Write a descriptive paragraph about your product. Tell the name of your product, what it looks like, what it does, and how it helps or affects people. Include any additional information that will help describe your invention. Use descriptive words and details that will inspire good mind movies for your readers
Scoring Guide
A sentence stating the name of your product 5 points
Information about what your product does 25 points
Information about what your product looks like 25 points
Information about how your product helps or 25 points
affects people
Details that inspire good mind movies 20 points
Heaterator
ReplyDeleteHello, my name is mahlik and my invention is the Heaterator. I am
here to tell you about the heaterator. A Heaterator is the opposite of a
refrigerator. The heterator was manufactured by sears. The Heaterator
keeps your food warm, so you don’t have to use a microwave. It also keeps
your food warm for people who don’t want to eat there food that minute.
Also, the heaterator is less likely to catch on fire than a toaster oven. The
Heaterator is as tall as a regular refrigerator and as wide as a washer
machine. The only colors they come in are pink, white , yellow,and purple.
Also the only designs they come in are a yellow background and a purple
flower. The cost of my invention is $349.99 because it is brand new and no
other refrigerator comes in these colors or designs. Call 1800-321-4567 or
go to www. sears/heaterator.org to check it out. Thank you for your time.
By Mahlik
The EverLasting Pencil
ReplyDeleteMy invention is called the Everlasting Pencil. This invention is a pencil that last forever. This invention was made to help people in many way when people got to write, they can stick to one pencil and don’t need to sharpen the pencil more than once, for the led just keeps coming out. So, hop up and give all your pencils away, it’s time to use the Ever Lasting Pencil. Another way the Everlasting Pencil helps is so kids don’t fidget around with pencils. It keeps kids from repeatedly having to get up to sharpen there pencil. Also, all your teacher needs to do is to hand you an Ever Lasting Pencil it is yellow and it has a velvet griper on it. Also it is about 6 inches long. At the end of the pencil it has a hot pink eraser. The eraser is about 3 inches long, also it is a number two pencil. It is one of the finest pencils of all times. The Ever Lasting Pencil has a certain chip in it that tells that it is your pencil, this way your pencil won’t get lost. I made this pencil that lasts forever because it saves more tree from getting cut down. To order the EverLasting Pencil call 825-5544. If you call now you’ll get an extra one free. Call now or buy one for only $10.99 at Walmart.
By,
Taylor
PARACHUTE PANTS
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Ethan and I have invented something so awesome! You will all die when you hear what it is. It is called Parachute Pants. My invention works like a real parachute bag because you have to pull a lever and the parachute comes out the back of the pants. These pants are better than those backpacks with the parachutes in them that the pros use. The pants come in three different colors like red, blue, and black. Thank you for your time to listen how my product works.
By
Ethan
THE AUTOMATIC DIAPER MACHINE
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Cierra and I have a very cool new invention that I would like to share with you. The invention I want to tell you about IS THE ....... AUTOMATIC DIAPER MACHINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Would you like to know what this machine does. Well you’re about to find out. First you buy the machine from any store. Then you hook the machine up to the ceiling. You have a remote that has the buttons you need on it. After you hook it up, you push the button on the remote that changes the baby’s diaper A pair of hands come down and change the baby. But thats not all it does. It also checks on the baby and a bath. This machine also feeds the baby. It does all this just by the touch of a remote. This machine comes in handy, for example when you are busy doing the house work and the baby needs to be changed, you just keep the remote with you wherever you go and you just push a button and there you go the baby is taken care of. You can buy this for only $19.99. If you buy 1 you get 1 FREE.
YOU CAN ALSO CALL 1-800- 66-44-66
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WRITEN BY CIERRA
Sert Robot
ReplyDeleteHi, I am John the Awesome and this is what I invented: The Sert Robot.
The Sert Robot is a male or female robot. You just have to add the extra parts. This is why you should buy the Sert. The Sert is a robot that will do anything you ask it to do for you. It is waterproof, so it can do the dishes and play with the kids in the pool. The male Sert Robot is a 5-ft robot that looks like he is wearing a tuxedo. He has a round body and has roller-blades for feet. The female robot looks like a women in a blue dress. Her hair is tied in a ponytail and is colored blondish brown. The Sert is a robot that is very honorable and will give its life to have fun and protect the kids. P.S. The Sert is thirty-four dollars. It is a very expensive because it‘s hard to make. This product is manufactured by John The Awesome in Richford, Vermont.
By John The Awesome
Silly Earrings
ReplyDeleteHello this is miss Olivia and I am here to tell you all about silly earrings.
Silly earings are twice as fun as normal sillybands. The sillybands earings are made with hoops and have little charms on them so you can wear them with or without charms. Look I know wearing them does not sound like fun, but theese come in glow in the dark there are also rainbow colerd ones and they also come in sparkly ones. These silly earings also come in the shape of famous people like Disney Channel stars and movie stars. Some Silly earings are shaped like numbers, symbols, candy and others. Silly earings can be used as many things like pins on bags. Silly earings can make you the coolest anywhere. Rember the more you buy the cooler you will be.
Call 1-800-355-299 Manufactured by miss Olivia and workers.
I am Responding to Mahlik's entry. I think you did a good job on creating this invention also i think you put it at a resonable price. I think you can improve on making your invention name capital. And you could give some more details. But other than that i think you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteBy taylor
My name is Robert and I am a inventor. I have discovered another tele-porter the Dimension tele-porter.
ReplyDeleteThis invention will be the most fun and exiting of all inventions. The Dimension tele-porter puts you in a dimension of your choice. It looks like a metal circle. Its also silver with steps that leads you to the metal circle. This invention will help people feel comfortable at there place. You could just take one glimpse of this invention and you know you are going to like it. This invention is assembled by rough metal so it should not be in use of some one under 10 years old.
The Robot Teacher
ReplyDeleteHie my name is Kady and I am here to help you in school. I invented a new product called “ The Robot Teacher”. Are you failing in school? Are you not understanding what you are supposed to do in school? Do you need help in math? Are you one of the kids that get pick on because you are not good in school? If you answer yes to any of these question, then the robot teacher is for you! So pick up the phone and dial 933-5382. The Robot Teacher comes in any color you want. The Robot Teacher can even look like a wwe wresler john cena. The john cena Robot Teacher looks likes: The John cena Robot Teacher has him with his arms poting at the person in front of The Robot Teacher and if you push the red bottom it saids “you can’t see me.” For the girls there is a justin bieber. For the justin bieber Robot teacher it has him look at the person in front of it. If you push the blue bottom he sings “ stuck in the moment with you”. It is 5 feet tall. It has big round blue eyes. Its 18 inches long and so is the legs. A metal garbag can for the stomack and a small metal garbag can that has a small cover on the top. Well, order now and get three free text books. Math, languse, and history.
Mahlik
ReplyDeleteI THINK THE HEATERATOR WAS COOL AND I THINK IT WAS COOL
ETAN
John I think you did good.
ReplyDeleteethan i think you did a awsome job i think you can ask more qustins.
ReplyDeleteby kady
I am responding to Taylor's entry. I think you did a good job on the deatails because I could picture the pencil in my head. I think you could improve on saying why you said the cost was $10.99. I still thik you did a good job.
ReplyDeleteBy Mahlik
Ever lasting eraser
ReplyDeleteThe ever lasting eraser is the best eraser there is. This eraser will never wear out no matter how much you use it. Teachers should buy these eraser because you could give them to your class at the beginning of the year and then there would be no more kids interrupting class to ask to get an eraser. With less erasers being used less rubber trees would have to be cut down. Also it wont cost the school as much money because the school wont have to keep buying erasers. There, now that you know about the ever lasting eraser heres some info on how it looks. The eraser is pocket sized. Also it comes in different colors like black, red, blue, pink and gray. Also it comes in different shapes like a square, triangle, circle and hexagon. The main shape that you will find in stores is square and circle. So imagine your in class and you have been erasing all day and your eraser does not wear out wont that be cool. There that is my invention the ever lasting eraser.
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Dylan
kady i like your invention and the idea you did a very good job.
ReplyDelete-Aaron B
Cierra I think you did a good job making no mistakes but I think you could improve on describe what it looks like.
ReplyDeleteJohn
The Math Helper
ReplyDeleteHi, I am the inventor of The Math Helper. Well, if you’re wondering what The Math Helper is then i will tell you. The math helper is a mechanical pencil designed to help you in math.. The Math Helper also comes in different colors like blue,green,purple and many more. To turn it on you push the eraser down . When the eraser pops back up it is on. After you turn it on you write the equation and then it dose the rest for you.This is how it works Its automatic calculator starts to work and the answer is projected on the left side of The Math Helper. best of all the Math Helper is selling at a great price of 19.99!! This great offer will not last forever. Your math teacher will never know. To order now call the number bellow !!
1-802-391-8783
I am responding to Roberts entry. I think you did a good job useing your time wisly because you were on task. I think you can inprove on telling more about your invention because you did not tell much about it.By Dylan
ReplyDeleteI am responding to Cierra's entry
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job I like how you had a price included. It really realed me in. I think you could decribe it more like what color is it. because somebody might want a blue one.
Post by olivia
ceara i think you did a great job
ReplyDeleteThe butt scratcher
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Professor Jacob and I have invented something that could change mankind. The bum bum bum bum butt scratcher. My product has a gold shiny shaft with a nice velvet handle and a gold medle hand on the end. The way this awesome product is used is first you grab the nice velvet handle. Next you lower its gold hand down to your butt. Then you scratch, aaaa a good sensation. This is a good product for our country because, lets say you are standing up and you have a itch on your butt and you cant reach it with those short stubby arms. So you grab the butt scratcher to extend your reach and scratch. This is a great item for all adages. To order please call 1800-629-0666 or go online to www.buttscracher.com
hi robert
ReplyDeletei think you did a good job using good languag because you said glimpse in your invention piece. I think you could improve on telling more about your invention.
- your friend jacob
The Funky Fart Man
ReplyDeleteHello my name is professor Kyle, I just invented the funky fart man. The funky fart man will surprise people because it farts when when ever you tell it to. If someone has problems farting they can call up the funky fart man. The funky fart man is red and green. It has green arms and green legs. His body is all red. His shoes are red and green. If you want to buy the funky fart man call 180091010 or go to www.The funky fart man. org. its price is 75 dollars.
by Kyle
THE EVERLASTING DOG BONE
ReplyDeleteHi i am professor Bailey. I invented the Everlasting dog bone. When a dog goes to eat the Everlasting Dog Bone it will last forever. It will never gets smaller and you can buy it five feet long. Even if your dog can sit there and chew on it for two hours and it will still be five feet long. After 1 year you can measure it and it will still be five feet long. The Everlasting Dog Bone looks like a regular dog bone but it is black ,it is really really hard,and it ,tastes like a licorice Twisler Dogs spend a lot of time with it. It looks different because there not regular bones that you would usually use or chew. The Everlasting Dog Bone helps people because it does not leave a mess like a regular dog bone does do. Your dog can just lay there and chew on it and an hour later he will not get sick. Most bones only last five minutes but this bone this one lasts forever. This will work for any dog if you don’t want a mess in your house. This dog bone makes your dog very very healthy and it makes your dog happy.To get this dog bone call 1800-725-8972.......It is very very cheap to get this dog bone you get it for only 3.00 for each Everlasting Dog Bone...............................
BY BAILEY
I am responding to mahlik's entry. I think you did a good job on a detailed summary. I think you can improve on cheeking spelling errors.
ReplyDeleteyour friend kyle
I am posting a comment to John's entry i think that he did a good job writing your thing because it is neat that you have to build it your self.
ReplyDeleteyour friend BAILEY
THE CAT SCRATCHER!!
ReplyDeleteThe name of my invention is the CAT SCRATCHER. The cat scratcher doe’s a few things like when the cat walks on it the machine can scratch your cat, feed your cat, and weight it too. All you cat owners now how your cat loves to eat and get scratched. Your cat will respond like it never has before. This machine looks like a scale with a food dish and a hand that is ran by a motor. The machine has chrome accessories like all the metals ares chrome. The machine can help you by not having feed your cat or bring it to the vet to weight it. This invention will help you if you cant bend over to scratch your. This machine can do it for you. The scratcher will make your cat in heaven. The big velvet hand can scratch your cat witch ever way it roles. My product will cost you $350,000 JK only $30.00. Call this number 1-800-625-0666.
THE CAT SCRATCHER!!
ReplyDeleteThe name of my invention is the CAT SCRATCHER. The cat scratcher doe’s a few things like when the cat walks on it the machine can scratch your cat, feed your cat, and weight it too. All you cat owners now how your cat loves to eat and get scratched. Your cat will respond like it never has before. This machine looks like a scale with a food dish and a hand that is ran by a motor. The machine has chrome accessories like all the metals ares chrome. The machine can help you by not having feed your cat or bring it to the vet to weight it. This invention will help you if you cant bend over to scratch your. This machine can do it for you. The scratcher will make your cat in heaven. The big velvet hand can scratch your cat witch ever way it roles. My product will cost you $350,000 JK only $30.00. Call this number 1-800-625-0666.