Response to Literature: Freak the Mighty-Concluding Paragraph
Conclusion-
Repeat The Thesis Statement Somewhere in the Conclusion.
Your Job Here is to Remind the Reader of the Focus of the Piece.
Include the Title of the Book.
As you can see, Max is brave and strong for many reason. Max is brave because he went on adventures at night. max is strong because he could easily carry Freak on his shoulders. I loved Freak The Mighty by Rodman Philbrick. By: Taylor
I am responding to Taylor's piece of writing I think you did a good job on your conclusion because you said why they were brave and why you liked them. I think you could improve on saying To Conclude or In Conclusion. Because it makes more sentence and because it makes a complete sentence.
As you can see Freak The Mighty is strong,smart, and imaginative. Freak The Mighty is strong because they out ran Tony D and his punk's. Freak The Mighty is smart because they can think of a plan in a nano second. Freak The Mighty is imaginative because they pretend houses are castles and sidewalks are bridges. Now you need to read the book Freak The Mighty by Rodman Philbrick.
As you can see, The book Freak the Mighty and the book Angela and salem are similar in many ways. These books are similar because both authors put lots of thought into there stories. Also both authors make there books fun and exciting .I like both these books very much and I like there authors to. I enjoyed reading Freak the mighty very much.
As you can see, Max is brave and strong for many reason. Max is brave because he went on adventures at night. max is strong because he could easily carry Freak on his shoulders. I loved Freak The Mighty by Rodman Philbrick.
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I am responding to Taylor's piece of writing
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job on your conclusion because you said why they were brave and why you liked them. I think you could improve on saying To Conclude or In Conclusion. Because it makes more sentence and because it makes a complete sentence.
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Conclusion
ReplyDeleteAs you can see Freak The Mighty is strong,smart, and imaginative. Freak The Mighty is strong
because they out ran Tony D and his punk's. Freak The Mighty is smart because they can think of a plan in a nano second. Freak The Mighty is imaginative because they pretend houses are castles and sidewalks are bridges. Now you need to read the book Freak The Mighty by Rodman Philbrick.
By Mahlik
As you can see, The book Freak the Mighty and the book Angela and salem are similar in many ways. These books are similar because both authors put lots of thought into there stories. Also both authors make there books fun and exciting .I like both these books very much and I like there authors to. I enjoyed reading Freak the mighty very much.
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